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Old 03-13-2013, 08:35 PM   #16
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Thanks for the pointers gyarados.
I have tried to tweek the bits you said. Bigger chin and lips and tried to improve the forehead.
Now that I have rendered the head out again, I think I have to fix more on the forehead, and make the eyes and lips a tad bigger, will try to make the nosetip face a bit more up aswell.

So far the renderingtime is around 2 minutes, maybe 3 with the hair.
I use Vray in 3d studio max.
The hair, I exported a obj-file that I imported into max, so its geometry.
Also need to fix the neck, the anatomy isn't right.
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Old 03-18-2013, 07:45 PM   #17
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Taking a small break from the head and started sculpting a bit on the lowest layer of clothes on the torso. I will be making some hotpants and a shirt/dress thing on top of this one later.
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Old 03-19-2013, 01:52 PM   #18
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I still think the forehead is either too rounded and/or sticks out too much where it joins the nose. There also appears to be some pinching in the corners of the mouth and nose. The ears also look too small and lacking in shape.
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Old 03-21-2013, 06:49 PM   #19
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Thanks again gyarados for the usefull crits.
I have have tried to change what you pointed out, any other crits?:
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Old 03-21-2013, 07:17 PM   #20
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Forehead is way too high. Get the Bluray out and look at this shot.
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Old 03-21-2013, 07:57 PM   #21
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Hey it does look better, but the proportions still look off. Heres a suggestion not as a blueprint, but areas you should look over. I hope i saved the gif correctly.
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Old 03-22-2013, 03:04 AM   #22
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Looking good!
The skull is high because you are probably looking at the hair of the actor. You have some really good stuff going on in there. What really helps is to have a reference at hand while you are modelling. Try using a DAZ figure to rotate around and check out how the nose is structured and how the lips sit in the muzzle. You can take traits from the actress but there is a lot of common structure between all people.

I think DAZ is free to download now and it has excellent models for study. Actually that was what the software was originally intended for, as an artistic reference.

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Old 03-25-2013, 06:36 PM   #23
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Wow guys, thanks alot for helping me out here, I really apprechiate it!

Great gif gyarados! this is very helpful!

Airflow: ... I am ashamed of myself, I have watched the movie countless times, and I totally forgot about that scene, it's perfect for 3d modelling. I just have to get myself a bluray player for my computer, I have the film on bluray, but I don't want to take pictures of my tv, hehe.
Thanks for reminding me btw.

Thanks for posting Kanga, I will look into DAZ.

Here is my update for today, I hope you guys see the changes I have done:
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Old 03-25-2013, 09:48 PM   #24
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Take the paint off till you got the sculpt right, plain grey is more helpful. Thin down the cheeks. Look over the jaw and the height of the nose.
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Old 03-26-2013, 02:28 PM   #25
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I can totally see the changes you made, it is looking much better now. But I agree with Airflow.
 
Old 04-09-2013, 07:19 PM   #26
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No post in a long time due to sickness.
Thanks for the replies.

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