Wwii B-29 Bombing Scene, Albert Robles (3D)

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Old 08 August 2004   #1
Wwii B-29 Bombing Scene, Albert Robles (3D)



Title: Wwii B-29 Bombing Scene
Name: Albert Robles
Country: Usa
Software: Maya 5

I modeled this scene using Maya 5. It's a street in a Japanese neighborhood during the 1940's with US B-29 bombers flying overhead. This was my final project for my begginer's level modeling class. I would like to get into environmental modeling, so any and all comments will help me greatly!
 
Old 08 August 2004   #2
Hi, it reminds me one scene from great anime Tombstone of the Fireflies. I like this pict. Maybe the light is little bit sharp, but i gives to the picture the right atmosphere.
 
Old 08 August 2004   #3
the modeling is nice
but man! it needs some textures
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Old 08 August 2004   #4
Great ambient! I think you should make more detailed B-29 to use in the foreground and the low poly ones in the back. Agree that textures need improvement

Keep it up!
 
Old 08 August 2004   #5
It has an exceptionally mood, but IHMO the aircrafts need more details. They're obviously low poly models. I dislike the rotating propellers as well, they should have more transparency.
 
Old 08 August 2004   #6
Great Modeling, But I Think This Image Need More And Dirty Textures For The City, Think That The City It,s In War And It,s Too Clean.

Overall Nice Work.
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Old 08 August 2004   #7
Many thx for the many suggestions! Texturing and lightning has been a downer for me on this project. I sort of took a crash course in it during class. And yes, the B-29 is low poly, I hope I can revisit this project as I progress in my studies!
 
Old 08 August 2004   #8
The B-29's seem to be flying way too low. Also it seems they might be all flying at the same height; it would help if their heights are randomly arranged (this one I'm not sure about). Overall, its a great pic.
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Old 09 September 2004   #9
I really like the modeling, and that sky is absolutley gorgeous. Nice Job. All I would do, and of course this is a personal prefrence, is make the bombers less clear. For Example add some haze/fog. I would also make the bombers much more green (they look too blue/silver). Once again, Great job!
 
Old 09 September 2004   #10
thats realy crisp
 
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