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Old 09-29-2013, 02:06 PM   #1
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Futuristic Chinese Warrior --critiques please


so, i made great improvement in this piece, but something was just not right. i tried to add more characteristic details, but nothing was in my head... I hope you guys like this, and i really need some advice on what do i need to do to improve myself.

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Old 10-04-2013, 01:55 AM   #2
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What kind of futuristic design goals did you have when you made this? What type of soldier is he, and what is the main purpose of the armor in terms of functions?

You put two big barrels on his arm, and I assume they are meant to be cannons of some kind. But how is the ammunition fed to it? You have to think about your design logically, or else it won't make any sense.

Also, why is his head not protected?
 
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thanks for your advice! really appreciate that. I'll try to think more about design in the future and work hard!
 
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