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Old 10-17-2012, 12:57 AM   #1
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Cartoon Boy for Animation

Here s what I m working on at the moment, I m not sure if the proportions are right.


 
Old 10-17-2012, 01:08 AM   #2
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The corners of his eyes need to be close. There a gap.

Wireframe of your character?

nice shoes topo by the way
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Old 10-31-2012, 09:59 AM   #3
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Thanks, I tried more on the eyes but not happy, so I ve closed them for now.
Another small update, I m a bit struggling with the hair, I use Vray and its not looking great.
Hopefully I ll have more on the next update.

HI RES

And some wires

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Old 11-01-2012, 02:40 AM   #4
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Old 11-01-2012, 07:35 AM   #5
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I think I m pretty much done with the modeling still need a couple things like, tongue, eye brows etc...
I ll start texturing soon.




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Old 11-01-2012, 10:29 AM   #6
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Old 11-02-2012, 01:16 PM   #7
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nice! love the hair style.. the choice of modeling instead hair/fur good one.
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I like the overall look, the latter renders suggest its falling into place for you.
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Looking good so far, Love the face & hair. The arms looks like rubber tube at the momet, but Iam sure they are still WIP.
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Cheers, yeah its getting there, I m starting to rig him now, more to come.

PKD: you mean the shader or the shape of the arm look like rubber tube?
 
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The shape of the arm, especially from the shoulder to the elbow. Also, I think the lower arm is longer than the upper arm.
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RUN CYCLE

Thanks PKD, I ve shorten the arm a bit.
I ve finished most of the body rigging, still need to fix some skinning problem, I might also do a bit of cloth simulation, but that will be for later on.

The run cycle is not great but the purpose was to try the rig and the skinning.
For the sound I used a sound from Zombie Playground WIP animation, I hope its ok.

Soon I ll start rigging the face.

Thanks for watching
 
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