|12 December 2012||#1|
Join Date: Jun 2012
My spaceship need help!
looking for some advice.
PS. I wonder why there is no reply T_T
Last edited by wwwzealot : 12 December 2012 at 10:30 AM.
|12 December 2012||#2|
Join Date: Mar 2003
Lens flare effect is not helping. Is very distracting above all the 4 circles clustered together.
Bring foreground (bottom right corner) much closer to the camera.
Make the ship engine bigger and brighter
There is something disturbing about those two bridges parallel to the border and exactly at same level as the horizon. Move them up?
|02 February 2013||#4|
Join Date: Mar 2002
The visual weight of your composition isn't very well balanced right now. A possibility is to extend your canvas on the right and bottom, so we see a lot more of the structure the figures are standing on, to counter the weight of the spaceship and establish your premise/scene wit more interesting detail.
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