"predator Of The Deep", Jostein Remi Arnoe (3D)

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Old 05 May 2005   #1
"predator Of The Deep", Jostein Remi Arnoe (3D)



Title: "predator Of The Deep"
Name: Jostein Remi Arnoe
Country: Norway
Software: Maya, Photoshop

Well be gentle.. this is my first post here..

This still i made ive tried to capture the undersea moment.
Im still very wet behind the ears with rendering , so i take critique with a smile.. ;)
 
Old 05 May 2005   #2
Heey Jostein,

It looks quite interesting yet! The models of the ships look quite detailed, and the particles floating off look nice and give it some extra touch!

Some small points you could see as crit / points to maybe fix :

Maybe theres a bit too much 'grass' on the bottom... And maybe the mesh of the bottom is a bit too noisy... Maybe it would be interesting to put down some 'treasures' and so there... Or other sunken-ships?
Maybe you could also play a bit with the camera-angle, to make it to a more 'sensational' composition? And maybe to play with the colors... all is quite blue now, if you add some bright-yellowish tint around the 'explosion', you'll get an (even more ) amazing piece of art with a good color-feel!

Good luck with it & I hope you'll 'accept' my critique! ,
Gijs
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Old 05 May 2005   #3
heya Jostein

Well i have to agree to what Dutchman says with the critique on this one . Maybe work slightly a bit more on composition and see about the grass a slight bit .

In all its good just a few things to make the work stand out a slight bit more

Good job dude
 
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