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Old 02 February 2013   #76
Hi,

Thanks for you comment Comar93, very usefull again.

Here is the new lighting and increasing and detailing more fire behind the door.




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Old 02 February 2013   #77
Looks better! Good job... One thing though, I think you've cutoff the door at the top too much and for some reason it bothers my eye, I think since it's one of the two main focal points and it's like cutting off the forehead of the character. Also I think you could get away with a bit more depth..

Here I did something really really quick cause I'm in a hurry but you will get the picture.. The top is cutoff because I lack more of the render lol but it's so the door isn't cutoff from the picture...



Hope it helps...
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Old 02 February 2013   #78
Here's my suggestion on colors and mood.
And notice the blue backlight I tried to add on him, i mentioned before.

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Old 02 February 2013   #79
Here is the render with back light and more darker background:


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Old 02 February 2013   #80
I think I oversaturated image in my last "correction" (to say something in my defense, I worked on the net-book). So, I did a little different version today. I am still not happy with the bricks, and many other things, but I hope it is some progress.
Alas, my painting skills are too poor.

It would be nice to turn this of into a challenge, to see what other correction people could produce.

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Old 02 February 2013   #81
Originally Posted by d4rk3lf: I think I oversaturated image in my last "correction" (to say something in my defense, I worked on the net-book). So, I did a little different version today. I am still not happy with the bricks, and many other things, but I hope it is some progress.
Alas, my painting skills are too poor.


Both of your corrections look great but I wouldn't go with either one but a mix between the two Too much fog and light in the latter and too much saturation in the first one. But a mix of both would be the best.

Also my image wasn't a color correction, but more of a placement suggestion, the colors in it look awful lol
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Old 02 February 2013   #82
Hi,

Here is another render, waiting for feed backs:



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