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Old 11-08-2012, 04:26 PM   #1
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Recent animation test

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=K5k9...=6&feature=plcp

Hi Guys... pls check my recent animation test with Malcolm Rig.and comments pls...Thanks
 
Old 11-10-2012, 01:18 AM   #2
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Wow really nice stuff here. In my humble opinion, when he catches his breath behind the rock, the breathing in the chest is exaggerated too much; I would tone it down a little. When he vaults at the end, the hang time is a little weird. I think I know the effect your going for, and I would say try playing around with the timing, and getting a slightly different feel on the slow in and out of the action.

Let me know how it goes.
 
Old 11-14-2012, 02:18 PM   #3
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Superb.

Giggles said everything i wanted to.. some ease in and out on a couple of bits would help give a bit more weight. other thing id say is the head bang didn't read too clear first view.. maybe upon hitting his head he should not just lower his head but maybe away from the source of impact before moving on?

Lightyears in front of owt i can do tho mate.. great work!
 
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