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Old 07-28-2014, 06:54 AM   #1
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Madonna anime

A work I did for an anime contest
would love to get some critique

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Old 07-30-2014, 05:41 AM   #2
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The likeness is actually pretty good, although the style isn't quite anime. Did the contest require you to work in a more distinctly anime style?

The main issue I see here is how flat your values are. The forms are barely readable, and from the chest down, she's essentially just a flat cardboard cutout.

Her hair can use a bit more finesse in rendering.

The lighting on her is kind of vague and undefined. You need to establish the light sources in the scene and then be consistent about it.
 
Old 07-30-2014, 06:33 AM   #3
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"Lunatique" : Thank's for the critique .
I wasn't too sure myself if it was "anime" enough .
Your comments are really helpful . I was clueless on how to improve from where I was at .
 
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