CGTalk > WIP > WIP/Critique: 3D
Login register
Thread Closed share thread « Previous Thread | Next Thread »  
 
Thread Tools Search this Thread Display Modes
Old 01-21-2013, 11:55 AM   #1
Knusperschnitzel
Explorer
 
Knusperschnitzel's Avatar
Martin Speidel
Designer
Hamburg, Germany
 
Join Date: May 2006
Posts: 7
Room

Hello, this is my first try with C4D & Vray. Comments and critique welcome!



 
Old 01-21-2013, 12:28 PM   #2
MurtazaRizvi
3D Murtaza
 
MurtazaRizvi's Avatar
portfolio
Murtaza Rizvi
Karachi, Pakistan
 
Join Date: Jul 2010
Posts: 735
although its a nice rendering, i find the view not so exciting/interesting. also the bed looks too hard, the chandlier looks too papery, but luv the book shelf and shoes.
__________________
3D RULES ALL THE WAY
 
Old 01-21-2013, 07:54 PM   #3
Kev3D
Agent
 
Kev3D's Avatar
portfolio
Kevin Russell
3D Artist
Kevisual
London, GB
 
Join Date: Jan 2003
Posts: 1,761
Send a message via MSN to Kev3D
I agree with Murtaza, the lighting and realism looks pretty good but this image could be dramatically improved with better composition. Find some interior renders or photographs that you like and see how they've placed the camera and the objects in the space.
__________________
3D Reel, Photography and Blog
 
Old 01-28-2013, 08:56 AM   #4
Knusperschnitzel
Explorer
 
Knusperschnitzel's Avatar
Martin Speidel
Designer
Hamburg, Germany
 
Join Date: May 2006
Posts: 7
yes, i had a hard time creating vray textures in c4d. there's a lot for me to learn
thanks for the feedback
 
Old 01-28-2013, 08:56 AM   #5
CGTalk Moderation
Expert
CGTalk Forum Leader
 
Join Date: Sep 2003
Posts: 1,066,478
Thread automatically closed

This thread has been automatically closed as it remained inactive for 12 months. If you wish to continue the discussion, please create a new thread in the appropriate forum.
__________________
CGTalk Policy/Legalities
Note that as CGTalk Members, you agree to the terms and conditions of using this website.
 
Thread Closed share thread


Thread Tools Search this Thread
Search this Thread:

Advanced Search
Display Modes

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

vB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is Off
CGSociety
Society of Digital Artists
www.cgsociety.org

Powered by vBulletin
Copyright 2000 - 2006,
Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.
Minimize Ads
Forum Jump
Miscellaneous

All times are GMT. The time now is 04:42 AM.


Powered by vBulletin
Copyright ©2000 - 2016, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.