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Old 10-04-2012, 09:35 PM   #1
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Cartoony hotdog

Hello, this is a quick silly animation of a delicious hotdog I made in my spare time. Now I want to refine it a little more and try to make it shine as a piece for my portfolio.
I'm thinking of animating a hand to hold it and add some more props, and try to make the animation more hilarious.
What do you think?

https://vimeo.com/49981570
 
Old 10-04-2012, 11:13 PM   #2
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Ha! the sound FX are awesome. I prefer ketchup over mustard..but anyways, I'm noticing one thing. Its at the very end when the hot dog and bun rest downwards at the last 1 or 2 seconds. The texture for the inside of the hot dog? Doesn't move with the hot dog. Looks like its a layer the hot dog is moving through.
 
Old 10-04-2012, 11:23 PM   #3
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Yep you're right. I only used procedural materials in this scene, maybe it's a problem with the noise map that isn't mapping correctly. I'll look into that, thanks!
 
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Really funny!
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