|10 October 2012||#1|
Join Date: May 2007
Where the Way Fish Fly, Abbey TerMeer (2D)
Title: Where the Way Fish Fly
Name: Abbey TerMeer
"Meet me there..."
Commission for InfinityForever at Deviantart of her character Savanna.
Savanna is a mermaid or Mer-Shark rather. I asked if she would be okay if I introduced deep sea elements into the character design and she approved. I am very proud to submit this into my portfolio.
Artwork © Abbey TerMeer
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|10 October 2012||#2|
BA Computer Graphic Arts for Animation
The Animation Workshop
Join Date: Jul 2012
The mood of this is lovely - I love the flow you get with the fish, and the lighting and colours are also really nice. I just have one criticism - the anatomy of the area around her breasts is very strange. Maybe you looked at reference of someone with a bra on? They kind of hang like she's wearing a bra, but then the bra isn't there so they hang very unnaturally. Unfortunately it stands out quite a lot because the dark nipples on the light skin contrast quite a bit making it somewhat of a focal point. I think it would really be worth working with that area to make it a really good portfolio piece. The rest of her is very nice though - I really like the face and hair
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