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Old 03 March 2013   #16
Update, before I go to bed.

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Old 03 March 2013   #17
I am liking this a lot. The warm glow gives this piece a nice mood. In terms of composition, you kind of cropped the hand at a weird spot. I suggest you extend the canvas to the left a bit, or move the figure to the right. Just a suggestion. Good Luck. Hope to see more.
 
Old 03 March 2013   #18
Hey I Pretty much finished tur painting if theres anything thats off please dolt hesistate to tell me!
http://alantyn.deviantart.com/art/T...vivor-359052723
 
Old 03 March 2013   #19
The strong tilt is a bit unsettling and there are still some anatomical flaws, but overall I like the new mood and how you've now clearly put the character at the center of the picture.

Anatomical flaws:
- The torch-holding hand is wrongly related to the wrist, in that it is held at a different angle than the forearm. Namely, the perspective you drew the fingers in makes it look like the hand is held palm upwards
- The face feels flat in the cheek and mouth region. You should define planes of light that clearly hint and the bone structure underneath.

Last, the spatial relationship to the skull could afford to be a little clearer: with all those darks, it's difficult to tell where she stands compared to the rock on which the skull rests.
 
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