|11 November 2012||#1|
Join Date: Jun 2004
Crysis inspired environment - need crits
I did this to work on my portfolio and put in about 7 solid days.
Looked at it so long I've lost all objectivity.
Was rendered in 3ds max and then painted over.
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Trying to get into movie/game environment concept design. So any help would be great. I have no idea if I like this piece or not, lol.
Some balanced feedback would be also good such as where it's going right as well as where it could improve.
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|12 December 2012||#2|
Join Date: Mar 2002
You need better coherency and consistency in your lighting. You've got a back-lit scene that has one main light source--the moon, yet your buildings are lit brightly on the side that are facing away from the moon. Everything in your scene should be strongly back-lit, with dark silhouettes, and any sides that are facing away from the moon or blocked by other object should be very dark. The sky might bounce a little light onto the shadow sides, but it'll be very faint.
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