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Old 01 January 2005   #151
You've made some pretty drastic changes from what I last saw :P The lower saturation looks better.

Perhaps it's a difference between our monitors, but I see a lot of black. It kinda confuses the depth, especially in the sky, as it becomes more difficult to determine the time of day and the weather conditions. In most of your areas, the darkest darks are all the same value, and they compete with each other for attention. Maybe you could try color variations in the clouds instead of using black, as it's creating a lot of negative space that leads to the foreground because of the black smoke from the building.

Keep it up! You can do it!
 
Old 01 January 2005   #152
Final Coloring: Eripere "Rescue"



hey... thought id find a cool name so i thought latin... dont ask y.. i just like latin... anyway.. thanks to ALOT OF HELP from yeewu i got this... gotta tidy it up a little then im done :D
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Old 01 January 2005   #153
Final Image: Eripere "Rescue"



We feel for the souls that have been lost during the war, the souls that fought bravely to protect the innocent, but does anyone think about what to do after the war? Rescue is just as essential and many can be lost through the chaos after battles.

My image is about the search and rescue operation that is dont after the battle, and the name Eripere means Rescue in latin. Anyway i hope ppl will like this image, and its been great fun doing this compo

Da
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Old 01 January 2005   #154
Thumbs up Good final !

Yo Feng! I see you finished, congratulations, I like the atmosphere of your scene! See you at the next challenge!
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Old 01 January 2005   #155
thanks m8 after i submitted at like the last minute... i noticed that i got SOOOOO much more to put in.... ahh well thats life :P
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Old 01 January 2005   #156
Hi daada,

congrats to your work. The mood and atmosphere are very well. You found a way to deal with characters and at the same time showing a grand environment without creating a poster look. Thatīs difficult and youīve achieved it very well. Finally the composition works very well - so donīt worry about the things you couldnīt include - because that counts most.

Good luck to you
Fahrija
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Old 01 January 2005   #157
Thumbs up woooowww

Thiiiiiiiiisss is much BETTER than the other one you made dada.I`ts NOT that confusing and much more alive.I really really like that.It Proves what i said concerning you.You are born to become a great artist one day.
 
Old 01 January 2005   #158
THANKS!! im gonna see if i can do the daily sketch so i cant get better at sketching... which is really where i need to improve :P
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