A3 flat, Bálint Berki (3D)

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  07 July 2013
A3 flat, Bálint Berki (3D)



Title: A3 flat
Name: Bálint Berki
Country: Hungary
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Andrássy Avenue 3 flat refurbishment, Budapest, Hungary
 
  07 July 2013
Hi Balint

Nice overall image, I like the design, the clutter and the colours. Nice to see a radiator finally in a render. (Magyarorszagon nagyon is kell :P)
Some things I would change though. Ive done architectural interiors here in Dubai for 3.5 years so out of my experience here are some comments:
-flares.....no. Dont use these kinds of streaky flares, use small simple glares rather with no secondary lens reflections.
-Floor I would make more reflective and a bit different from the furniture wood color.
-Increase the ambient occlusion or render a separate pass for it and add it in photoshop after to increase the wall and ceiling corners a bit.
-Dining chairs are too reflective to my taste, it draws the attention away from the scene and since the kitchen light is blurred from Depth of Field, one would expect the foreground to be blurred aswell....just seems physically wrong....maybe change the chairs to something modern, simple.
-Also add at least 3 but maybe 2 spotlights above the living area on that main beam.

All in all, great. Love the spotlights on the walls, pictures a nice choice on the wall and overall super. Keep it up.

Csak igy tovabb!! Udv Peter
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