Animaiton feedback - fence jump

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  02 February 2018
Animaiton feedback - fence jump

Hi all,

Looking to get some feedback on a short animation, any comments welcome. Thanks!

Here is a link to my animation:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Hi6...eature=youtu.be

I was using this as the main reference:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QqIFSvFdVR0
 
  03 March 2018
Hi,


If you are using this reference for an example and learning enhancement, i will say its fine but it can be improved like.

1 Your timing doesnot matches and it doesnot have proper weight. Pause refernce video and check it fram by frame to understand motion and weight. It will become more good.

2 Your poses doesnot look natural. Try to work and understand poses. Like create something where character looks alive. Its look fhave no weight and pose.

It will emerge out more better.
 
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