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Old 09-13-2013, 07:48 AM   #1
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Political animation

Hello everyone
As you may know, the Prime Minister of Spain and his party are involved in a serious case of corruption.
This is my animated view of the matter ...

Is a parody of the famous scene of G.Kelly in "Singin´ in the Rain" starring by famous PM Mariano Rajoy and the Popular Party envelopes (sobres in spanish).

I'm still pretty green in animation, but I belive that practice makes the master, so I would like read your criticism and advice in this regard.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kjBVU16qygE
 
Old 09-19-2013, 07:55 PM   #2
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Pretty epic project!

some notes:

- when he walks in, as he comes down on the steps he pops down
- the step turn and looks up from that walk, his head pops up, you'll need a settle and a better arc on the head turn
- The camera cuts to him grabbing the cash or whatever isn't working. Looks like a jump cut or something. It's very abrupt and interrupts the flow of your animation. makes me say "what just happened?"
- after he says "i'm happy again" his body does a weird bend down movement. it's too quick, abrupt and has no arc
- when he is on the post, he's just holding that one pose for too long. You have a chance there to change it up a bit. His body just looks like a straight rod sticking out. he's there for a while and without something changing it's boring
- after that close up of that paper showing something, he goes to reach for it. His head does a weird pop down and up. again too abrupt and quick
 
Old 09-21-2013, 07:04 AM   #3
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Thank you

Hi Phredrek

I want to thank you for the time you've spent watching and analyzing my animation.
It is very important to me your analysis and advices.
Thanks again and best regards
 
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