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Old 03-15-2013, 04:23 PM   #1
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Jaybirds, Anneliese Mak (2D)



Title: Jaybirds
Name: Anneliese Mak
Country: Australia
Software: Photoshop

Even though this is an older work, critique on texture and colour would be great.
 
Old 03-19-2013, 01:47 PM   #2
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Very lovely. I really love her dress design, especially at the bodice. You did a good job capturing the ruffles and folds of the dress, and her proportions are good and well stylized. Her hair looks pretty cool and I like how it's styled to resemble the jaybirds. The jaybirds came out really nicely, although some of the proportions (like the main jaybird on her hand) is off in proportions (mainly the winds size and shape). Although their heads are really nice. Overall, a very lovely piece and a keeper for your portfolio (nice style). Keep it up. Great job.
 
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Thank you very much! Yeah that bird's wings bug me, next time I'll definitely try to avoid that. Actually.. I might try to fix it before I submit it in any portfolios, thanks again.
 
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