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Old 09-26-2012, 10:00 AM   #1
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A girl, duan likun (3D)



Title: A girl
Name: duan likun
Country: China
Software: Maya, Photoshop, Shake

Hello, all!
Thank you for Uwe Gleiß gave me some advice.
I have made some improvements
I would like to hear your voice,all comments are welcome!
Hope you like it.
 
Old 09-27-2012, 06:42 AM   #2
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At least to my eyes this is quite an improvement. Now she is stylized and not starved any more. For my taste the neck is still a bit thin but don' let yourself be pushed around, that's really only a personal opinion.
Stepping a bit closer with the camera and tuning down the contrast of the background is also a big improvement. It now has the atmosphere of a quiet and personal studio shot.
And the bigger pupils and changed highlights in the eyes give her more character. Now she's really looking at the viewer and thus get's nearer to her/him.

Well done - I'm looking forward to other works by you.
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Old 09-27-2012, 07:35 AM   #3
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Beautiful!
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Old 09-27-2012, 04:43 PM   #4
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Nice work!!
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Old 10-01-2012, 01:18 PM   #5
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Talking I like

This is really, I battle to do hair in 3D
do u have any tips,

this image is really look great
 
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