|09 September 2012||#1|
Join Date: Sep 2012
A girl, duan likun (3D)
Title: A girl
Name: duan likun
Software: Maya, Photoshop, Shake
Thank you for Uwe Gleiß gave me some advice.
I have made some improvements
I would like to hear your voice,all comments are welcome!
Hope you like it.
|09 September 2012||#2|
Join Date: Dec 2004
At least to my eyes this is quite an improvement. Now she is stylized and not starved any more. For my taste the neck is still a bit thin but don' let yourself be pushed around, that's really only a personal opinion.
Stepping a bit closer with the camera and tuning down the contrast of the background is also a big improvement. It now has the atmosphere of a quiet and personal studio shot.
And the bigger pupils and changed highlights in the eyes give her more character. Now she's really looking at the viewer and thus get's nearer to her/him.
Well done - I'm looking forward to other works by you.
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