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Old 10-09-2004, 09:41 AM   #1
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Sword Fighter, Julien Bonnet (kraschtm) (2D)

Title: Sword Fighter
Name: Julien Bonnet (kraschtm)
Country: France
Software: Photoshop

This girl was first done on paper, a period i worked on the life and mood i can express through my characters.
I made her in one hour on paper and another one to bring her in cg.

always pleased and intersted by your critics.

papersketch :
Old 10-09-2004, 07:00 PM   #2
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Maybe you should check her hand holding the sword, it seems too big..
Old 10-10-2004, 09:19 PM   #3
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I think you lost some nice features you had in the paper sketch. Her face seems expressionless now. And I agree there is something about her hand holding the sword...

I like the suit, xpecially the black stripes in contrast with the white jacket... I'm not much into the green pants I think they are off the chromatic palette you where using...

Nice work overall but I think you could work a bit more in her and come out with a great piece.
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Old 10-11-2004, 02:06 PM   #4
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Originally Posted by thesuit
Her face seems expressionless now.

Actually, I think the expression on her face is great, like she's watching and totally focussed on her opponent's next move. Her hair is symmetrical, which is odd because it's parted on both sides. I agree that her left hand should be bigger -- I didn't notice until I read the previous posts, but fingers on her right hand are quite a bit thicker and longer than those on her left. Wonder why her pants are so low but otherwise a nice job!
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