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Old 09-17-2012, 10:44 PM   #1
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Hello Everyone,

This is a personal project I have been working on lately (and also my first work posted on CGsociety). There are a lot of really great artists here and I would really like comments and criticisms.

Thank you,

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Old 09-18-2012, 09:54 AM   #2
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Looks really good. Nothing much to critic at the moment.
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Old 09-18-2012, 11:44 AM   #3
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The road can need more work.. add some rocks, etc to get more relief.

Also the light feel like a studio beam
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Old 09-18-2012, 12:07 PM   #4
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I already like it! Probably move the camera a bit, or the windmills in the back.
My main issue probably would be the road. The "large scale" shape seems to irregular to me. usually a road gets not only shaped by the terrain beneath, but also from the stuff the that travels on it.
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Old 09-18-2012, 03:22 PM   #5
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I like it. The road being apparently a narrow one could do with some deeper track marks as the other posters observed. Good work otherwise.
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Old 09-18-2012, 03:26 PM   #6
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Thank you for the comments everyone!
 
Old 09-19-2012, 04:56 PM   #7
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Hello,

This is an update to the first image.

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Old 09-19-2012, 05:30 PM   #8
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Nice updates

Maybe you could add some grass in the middle of the road. Something where the wheels don't roll you will have nature who try to come out
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Nice updates

Maybe you could add some grass in the middle of the road. Something where the wheels don't roll you will have nature who try to come out


Thank you, I like that idea.
 
Old 09-19-2012, 08:07 PM   #10
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There appears to be a problem with scale of the windmills to me. Something about the perspective makes it look like they're very close to the camera but not big enough, or far enough away but too short, but maybe it's just me.
 
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