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Old 09-24-2012, 06:27 PM   #1
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Old 09-26-2012, 03:20 AM   #2
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Hi Gabe,

For lip sync,
'B'irthday. 'B'irthday 'P'arty 'B'oring 'P'ark, you need more closed mouth on those consonants... Try hold an extra frame shut but a close lips earlier. Your 'M' shapes are great.

You could/rotate pivot his wrist on the gestures of these words: uouosworld , everybody, somersault --it may make the gestures even more interesting. But so far you have a nice animation already.

Did u rig him?

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Thanks Narntson! And I used the setup machine, and the face machine to rig him.
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