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Old 11-15-2012, 05:43 PM   #1
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Post Guys, looking to improve my work- any advice? Thanks..

Guys, looking to improve my work- any advice? Thanks.. I only have one piece in my gallery called Nina- it kind of digital impressionism and sketchy. Any opinions and constructive criticism will be taken as helpful so please comment. Thanks for taking the time to reply Sonya
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Old 11-16-2012, 01:47 PM   #2
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You might get more response if you posted the image here. Reason? While commenting one can scroll back to the image. Instead of opening two windows like I am. Great job on the eyes mouth and nose. First thing that caught my eye was the ears. The face looks straight on. so I'm guessing you would see both ears? The left arm is blurry, artistic choice? If so... where the glove meets the wrist you went back to not blurry. I would have keep the same amount of attention you gave to the eyes. The left hand not sure about(palm)? I think I would have to see your reference on that.
 
Old 11-16-2012, 02:22 PM   #3
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Thumbs up your so right.. thanks for taking time to reply

The ear is lost in the brush strokes. The wole thing is just too sketchy- I see now after reading the thread we both commented on today. I think a little more fantasy and a lot more smooth detailing needed. And photo referencing included.

I treated it as a canvas painting where its acceptable to paint like this, and detail whats needed. My mistake.

Big learning curve here

I think ill move on from this lesson and do another piece to a better standard.

All with the detailing, no bluring.

Thanks for the feedback.

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