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Old 12-16-2012, 03:51 PM   #1
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3d Animation

what more i should do to this
(links to tutorials, guides or suggestions are greatly welcome)

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Test render of Car Animation he will drive

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test render of Starting Scene
Butterfly in Garden
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3D City Created ,
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Hi Itoocg!

Good start so far. For the walk cycle I think it would be better to have a side angle for us to see as well.

I think the arms are going up too high, with maybe too much bend in the elbow. I would also straighten out the legs more on the contact positions. Working in stepped keys until you really got the poses down could help. Maybe try and copy the poses from this link a little more.

http://www.idleworm.com/how/pic/a0002/wlk08.gif
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Old 12-29-2012, 03:01 AM   #7
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Hi RichMcCaffrey
Thanks for the guidance,
(i badly need it),

i will come up with the
suggested changes,

also Thanks for the image,
it's very good and very useful,
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One more
walk and then Run,
test animation,
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