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  04 April 2013
just girl

Hi! this is my new little sketch, waiting for crits and comments. Thanks!
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  04 April 2013
The body's proportions and anatomy doesn't seem right.

Where's the dip of her sternum?

Her shoulders also look very narrow. If you actually depicted the rest of her, she'd look like she's got a big head and a tiny body.

Why's there a big round dark spot at the bottom/left? What purpose does it serve in the image?

Your rim lighting on her face is illogical, because her hair should be blocking that rim light from reaching her face. You need to define exactly where your light sources are in relation to your subject, and then keep it consistent and logical.

Your main light source for her face seems oddly isolated only to her face and not affecting the rest of her such as her neck and body.
 
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