Spidey Jump needs crit

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Old 08 August 2012   #1
Spidey Jump needs crit

Hi there,
Could you give me some crit on this jump please?

Thank you very much!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dvlEOwB43lE
 
Old 08 August 2012   #2
Looks fine for more distinction why not stagger his legs midair and have his feet reach the top arc at a different frame? Also point his toes on take off, his toes come up and flex his calf muscles to cushion the landing
 
Old 08 August 2012   #3
Your last pose looks a bit odd because the rig isnt made to have the character with the chest forward and head back, so change it to something more like your first pose.
And as Narntson pointed out, add some offset in the legs (and arms)

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Old 09 September 2012   #4
from a quick look the jump feels fine overall, just the wrist poses at hte end bend unnaturally.
 
Old 09 September 2012   #5
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