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Old 04-29-2013, 10:03 AM   #1
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Feedback needed!

Hi Guys!

How are you all doing? I know youíre all busy people so it is really appreciated that youíre reading this. Iím currently working on a short film and Iím just trying to get the setting done.

Iíve attached the picture below and if youíre able to give me any feedback whatsoever then Iíd really really appreciate it. I really want this to look perfect so youíd be doing me a real favour. Iíve already noticed the paper is floating, Iíve already changed it. And apologies if I donít reply to all of you, donít worry I will of taken on your feedback for sure.



Many thanks

Nathan
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Old 04-29-2013, 09:22 PM   #2
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Hi, what software are you using, and what renderer?
 
Old 04-30-2013, 11:49 PM   #3
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Everything looks to clean and and flat, you should try and give your textures some difference and maybe use some texture maps.
Also the shadows on the right hand side of the screen look way too dark.

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Old 05-22-2013, 08:48 PM   #4
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what type of look are you aiming for, any possibility of using GI or reflective materials?
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