Machineflesh 2D Challenge Entry: Mike Bruinsma

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Old 06 June 2004   #16
I think the similarity to the Half-Life monsters is a bit too obvious. But I like it nevertheless.
I think the legs are a bit too thick (or similar) in comparison to the corpse.
If the top, let's call them "batteries", look more tech than organic, the legs from front to back should be more in line, If you know what I mean - the back leg should be moved slightly down for the sake of the perspective.
 
Old 06 June 2004   #17
Coloring WIP: Shocktroop



Here is the concept/illustration with a minimum of coloring added.
 
Old 06 June 2004   #18
Coloring WIP: Shocktroop



Here's the piece with some more color and value added.
 
Old 06 June 2004   #19
Oh no...another great entry I've missed ...sorry that I've not visited your link until this late stage.


I really like your sketches and thought the earlier action colour WIP with the five monsters attacking was amazing ...really dynamic and great depth.

Sometimes you can get bogged down with details (my entry has suffered from this) and this image has just enough to give the viewer all the information needed and retain life and energy.

Saying that, the latest WIP's are looking really cool and should help emphasise the machineflesh concept.

Great work...keep going and goog luck
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Old 06 June 2004   #20
awesome work in so little time, it's a pity this wasn't started earlier for the contest.. but i look forward to seeing it finished regardless! =) Personally i prefer the earlier version(s) of them guys, with a more organic (shaped) alien look as opposed to the more tank-like revisions.. but you're the artist. Either way i'm sure it will turn out great.. very nice work go go go!
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Old 06 June 2004   #21
Coloring WIP: Shocktroop



Here's another color update.
 
Old 06 June 2004   #22
Thumbs down

Looks very interesting. Reminds me of a combination between starship troopers bugs and the matrix sentinels. Looks amazing!
 
Old 06 June 2004   #23
Coloring WIP: Shocktroop



Here's another color update.
 
Old 06 June 2004   #24
and great attention to detail!
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Old 06 June 2004   #25
Final Coloring: Shocktroop



At this point I'll work at pulling the elements of the concept/illustration together.
 
Old 06 June 2004   #26
cool - lookin critter !
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Old 06 June 2004   #27
Final Image: Shocktroop



The final concept/illustration.
 
Old 06 June 2004   #28
Talking

I'm very impressed how you were able to come up with a great concept in such a short period. good luck in the competion.
 
Old 07 July 2004   #29
YAY....over halfway through all my bookmarks from during the challenge...I would just like to say voting has been SOOOO HARD for me...and how many do we get? We seem to get a lot more than I expected hehehe. I AM THE VOTING QUEEN! I just wish I had this time during critique Good WORK MIKE!!!! I LOVE YOUR BUG...and I love the kind of see-through membrane all over him, and your choice of colors and the mist. IT all works together SO WELL.
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