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  06 June 2005
Cool WIP: cat in the night

Hi guys!

i've started some days ago this work, where i'd like to do a cat... in the night! eh eh...
i have some ideas for the final image but i must think about a scene...

for now i do this: is only a start, keep in mind that is the first time that i do an organic model, so i know is not good... so i posted it here, where i can improve it (i hope! )

C&C are really welcome!
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  06 June 2005
hey men! well im not expert in cats,but that looks like one already.. the thing that look kinda weird in my opinion its the mouth,dont know,looks like too wide or streched out or something. Are you looking reference pictures?? that helps a lot...
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  06 June 2005
shy_guy: thanks for the reply! yes, there is something that must be changed in the mouth in particular and in the head in general... in fact i must add some details to the head and so i'll go on...

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  06 June 2005
just a small update...
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  06 June 2005
no comments? no crits?
 
  06 June 2005
the model is almost finished...

update:
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  06 June 2005
the nose seems little too sharp or as others mentioned too stretched out i think.
 
  06 June 2005
the nose needs to be more round, the upper wisker area should be more round, the eye area on a cat slopes back a little more than that the eyes need to sink back into the head a little more
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  06 June 2005
ok, thanks for the help, i'll try to fix this problems...

but also i'll start to do the fur, and it will be funny...
 
  07 July 2005
Peow! At least, i have a render test of the fur... every critics are welcome!


 
  07 July 2005
What a cool cat I like how far you have come with it.
Two small crits: From the side view the underside of the neck seems kind of big and your fur seems kind of short.
Still, it is coming along nicely and I look forward to the updates.
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  07 July 2005
thanks JohNLA for the crit! i've reduced a bit the neck, but re-crit if is not ok

ok, an update... added the fur to the head. i know the colors doesn't match, but tomorrow i'll fix it.

i also need help for the eyes, because i don't think they are ok. someone could help me?? thanks a lot...





 
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