|01 January 2007||#1|
Atlantic City, United States
"Getting Better" - My Painting Exercise, Kay Ong (2D)
Title: "Getting Better" - My Painting Exercise
Name: Kay Ong
Country: United States
Software: Painter, Photoshop
A simple character design, but I focused hard on the colors I used and tried to evolve my painting style a little, any C&C is welcome. I hope in my future works that I can slowly lower the anime tone bit by bit...I know the anime style will always show because it is my style but I do not want it to be typical picture.
the BG is just filler.
|01 January 2007||#2|
A Labyrinthine Mindportfolio
Join Date: Feb 2006
Its hard to crit this because of the mish mash of styles present -- but I'll tell ya this much, your work on the colors paid off, it's very cohesive, so nice job there!
Her face looks a little anthro -- her mouth is far far too wide, even for a manga stylization. Her torso is also so long -- but this wouldn't be so bad if she had slightly larger breasts (I can't believe I'm saying that, but there it is). She just seems slightly off proportion-wise. Very cool clothes and colors though, really well done there!
"Convention is like the shell to the chick, a protection till he is strong enough to break it through.”
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