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Old 06-21-2012, 10:01 PM   #1
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Feedback Please :)

Here is my latest work in progress, so please have a look and give some feedback.
Some clips are missing, but I hope it still makes sense.

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Old 06-22-2012, 08:37 AM   #2
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You need bigger weight shifts because at the moment the hips look like they are very still and linear.
Maybe break this shot down into about 8 smaller shots and concentrate on one at a time.

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Old 06-23-2012, 01:33 PM   #3
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Thanks for the feedback. I will look through the animation and try and spot that but if you don't mind, would you please specify where this happens in the animation.
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Old 06-24-2012, 03:12 AM   #4
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You need to go through the whole animation and check at EVERY step and action that the hips are centred over the foot that is planted on the ground.
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Thanks again, Ill do that
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