|02 February 2004||#106|
Join Date: Nov 2002
Hi Bang sanghyun,
Beatiful work! Superb.
I just have one criticism, because I have taken one or two archery classes. In the third picture, her posture is "incorrect" from a traditional archery standpoint.
My archery instructor always told me to stand up with my back straight, and my head perfectly vertical. I understand that for the composition, the inclined head looks cute, and follows the line of the bow. However, for those of us who know archery, the "cute but wrong" posture feels silly.
Her character design shows her to be an expert archer, so she should have expert archery posture! If you changed the composition, and had her head vertical and looking down the line of the arrow, it would be perfect!
Lastly, I'd show more tension in her two fingers that are holding the bow. Her right hand seems softly relaxed, not as if it were holding 50 pounds of tension from the string.
Other that those two points, I love your work! Inspiring.
|11 November 2004||#113|
Kendrick J. Lepage
3D Character Artist
Join Date: Apr 2004
simple yet eloquent!! very well done!
"All art is but imitation of nature."
-Lucius Annaeus Seneca
"All that I desire to point out is the general principle that Life imitates Art far more than Art imitates Life."
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