Sketchbook Thread of Abu Amir

Become a member of the CGSociety

Connect, Share, and Learn with our Large Growing CG Art Community. It's Free!

THREAD CLOSED
 
Thread Tools Search this Thread Display Modes
Old 07 July 2010   #16
It's a bit hard to critique what you have so far. You mentioned yourself it was a work in progress and from what I can see it has a long way to go. If you would like some critique this is what I think needs work-

If you are planning on doing a bust along with the chest I'd suggest adding the shoulders. The breasts need their nipples so we can properly read which way they are facing. The forehead on the left side seems like it is being pushed under the hair instead of the hair laying over it. The cheeks are bulging quite a bit, giving her a look like she has her mouth full of something or is blowing out her cheeks on purpose.
__________________
~Life is one big W.I.P.~
Sifu Says "Idleness is the holiday of fools"

My Sketchbook
 
Old 07 July 2010   #17
Thank you Tasp. It is exactly what I was expecting - some feed-back good enough to see which way this drawing should go. Thanks again for your advices.
 
Old 07 July 2010   #18
This is the digitally painted WIP (traditionally inked) of a quick sketch i posted at http://forums.cgsociety.org/showthr...364#post6598364 .

 
Old 07 July 2010   #19
Here are 2 old stuff of mine (old means around 1995). I hope you'll like it because at that time I enjoyed a lot to draw them. Made only in traditional media.


 
Old 01 January 2011   #20
Back again

I was absent quite a time. I'm back with the wip for a challenge on another site. Crits are welcome. The battle have as subject the confrontation between 2 organic entities (at least 80% organic). No mounts or companions are allowed.
 
Old 01 January 2011   #21
Wow that last one of the "battle" is a really good improvement on your first works that you posted! I'm pleasantly surprised.

I think that it looks promising.

One note, you said that it is your hobby, but in my opinion until you don't take it seriously you'll never really learn much or improve well. I mean, it's really a science and imagination together.

I used to struggle so much with hair, still do. It looked like a plate of spaghetti, or like a birds nest. Disgusting and always disappointed me. But yesterday I finally realized the problem is that I'm not patient enough or dedicated enough. In all those years I didn't realize that hair takes HOURS of work. HOURS and HOURS. So, you have to spend lots of time on it building it up slowly and with delicate attention.

But then again if you want to do cartoon style you don't need to do that, but if you are after realism then you probably will.

Hope that helps, Good luck Abu.
 
Old 01 January 2011   #22
Thread automatically closed

This thread has been automatically closed as it remained inactive for 12 months. If you wish to continue the discussion, please create a new thread in the appropriate forum.
 
Thread Closed share thread



Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

vB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is Off
CGSociety
Society of Digital Artists
www.cgsociety.org

Powered by vBulletin
Copyright 2000 - 2006,
Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.
Minimize Ads
Forum Jump
Miscellaneous

All times are GMT. The time now is 11:02 PM.


Powered by vBulletin
Copyright ©2000 - 2017, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.