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Old 05 May 2013   #1
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Hey guys,

we are a group of Austrian students working on a short animated film for a project. Itís about a drawing coming to live and leaving the sketchbook, wandering around on the desk. Since this is the first time we work on something bigger we would love to get some feedback, to come up with the best results possible.



We work with Maya and use vray as our renderer. The attached shots are some test renders, compositing isnít done with those yet. Let us know what your impression is, if anything seems off, especially with textures and lighting. This is our first time using vray, so any tips for that would be greatly appreciated.



Also, it would be interesting to know if anyone can help us reduce our render time. Does anyone have advice on what settings to change to get the best quality in as little time as possible.




camera: 1

http://s7.directupload.net/images/130509/rlvyos3u.png


camera: 3

http://s7.directupload.net/images/130509/8chd5iu8.png


camera: 28

http://s1.directupload.net/images/130509/2ojzie4i.png


persp:

http://s14.directupload.net/images/130509/ho82ig79.png




thanks in advance

Chris
 
Old 05 May 2013   #2
Instructions to the "focused critiques" forum say to use "insert image" and not post links to outside sites for people to view and critique your work. I bet you'd get responses if all images were viewable in your post instead of critiquers having to click on links to elsewhere and view each image separately.

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Old 05 May 2013   #3
Your images are too large and take too long to load, plus, what jarisky said:

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