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Old 09-16-2004, 11:34 AM   #1
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Kilua Fanart, Copyright Of Fifi (2D)



Title: Kilua Fanart
Name: Copyright Of Fifi
Country: Indonesia
Software: Photoshop

I'm not really new here, I was a stalker before, and keep drooling on other people's artworks. Now I only have a very little gut to post my work here.
This is a fanart of HunterXHunter, a manga done by Yoshihiro Togashi, one of my fav mangakas.
I know there's so many mistake here. Please give comments, critiques and suggestions. Please don't hesitate m(-_-)m *bow to the masters*
 
Old 09-16-2004, 04:01 PM   #2
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good work . but I think that you will have to make storyteller to the drawing

good luck and soory for my bad english.
 
Old 09-16-2004, 06:11 PM   #3
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hey its good.Love the face and hair. keep it up man!
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Old 09-17-2004, 02:59 AM   #4
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Originally Posted by teknoz
good work . but I think that you will have to make storyteller to the drawing

good luck and soory for my bad english.

Thanks. But I don't get the storyteller part ...O_o...what do you mean by storyteller?
 
Old 09-17-2004, 06:14 PM   #5
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So much good work here! Interesting how you've got the glow of a setting sun in the bottom left and the light of the moon top right. I like how you even blurred the lamp post in the extreme foreground. I only see two things to critique:

--Your character's buttocks should be more squared off on the left side. Butt should be squared to the viewer and left leg pointing forward.

--Skateboard's nose should be pointing up, not down during a jump. If nose hits the ground first, the skateboard will stop dead and your character will fall forward and really hurt him/herself (sorry, I don't know this character).

Glad you decided to share your work, it's really good!
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Old 09-18-2004, 04:39 PM   #6
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Ilikesoup> Thanks alot for your comments. I didn't think about the skateboard thing before...wew...thanks alot ^^.
 
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