The Journey Begins Challenge (2D) Entry: Tomasz Jedruszek

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  05 May 2006
The Journey Begins Challenge (2D) Entry: Tomasz Jedruszek

Tomasz Jedruszek is entered in the "The Journey Begins Challenge" update: View Challenge Page

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  05 May 2006
Hey Tomasz, hope you have time to finish...good luck!
 
  05 May 2006
Tomasz - this is John on EOTE. Your e-mail provider is broken again, my messages to you are bouncing back to me. Can you get an alternate e-mail at Yahoo or Hotmail and let me know how it's going on our project? Thanks.
 
  05 May 2006
I hope you get to finish this. The composition is certainly one of the strongest here. Although it looks like the guy is begging her to stay rather than saying goodbye.
 
  05 May 2006
Wow, great concept and sketches. This image looks really promishing, you must hurry!
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  05 May 2006
Enormous

Great composition and design, i really like the guards like they are rightnow, great texture.
 
  05 May 2006
Originally Posted by BaronImpossible: I hope you get to finish this. The composition is certainly one of the strongest here. Although it looks like the guy is begging her to stay rather than saying goodbye.



Sorry to all for my e-mail account malfunction latelly -it is been moved to another server so I hope it will resolve that "bouncing" problem for future..im talking about info@morano.pl not my "other " adress - it will take a while before it will be moved to another server as well


as for "begging guy"- guy is a she and she suppose to be saying "good bye" acctually - but i understand this scetch is very rough so it is very easy for make mistake. This will be more clear in my next milestone i promise.Anyways thx for all crits they are always most welcome in my work.

But form the other side it is not that bad she is begging her for staying insted saying "good bye " , remeber as i describe in my first post- neida has been judged and sentence for exile but she is still very proud and maybe even angry- I guess she doesn't realize how serious this situation is -she migh never see her sister again and still she wont even look at her ...hmm ,anyways "the journey begins" still suits to this picture. But i will try to fix her expresion so You can see young ,pround teenager , who is too angry to accept last good bye form only one person who loves her . but at the same time ,i'd like to show tears comming in her eyes -at the very last moment before she walk on the board -after all she's still just a child.

remeber that scene in "deer hunter" when Robert DeNiro found Christopen Walken in Saigoon playing russian roulete? THAT sort of expressions I 'd like to achieve in this artwork.

there is more story behind this scene, i know my job is to tell that story with the picture ,but in case i fail that i would like to say only few more words about those two sisters:
They were two best friends -normal family -but then comes war -they were splited.Younger neida due her exellet worrior skills went directly to the capital city of the Empire where she was most likely Emperor's "pet" been placed on the arena fighting with monsters etcfor Emperor's guest entertainmaent . then Emperor has fallen in love with her. But he saw her only as an alie ,strong and powerfull weapon on his side ,and mother of their PERFECT human being-child. To make her completly subordinte they gives her drugs , many of them ,for long time. after few years she was a killing machine not even remeber her true name.
Vakkun -older sister -surrvive the war in prisoners camp. She never give up to find Neida and take along with her a revenge on the evil Empire.But once she found her at last ,she realize that Neida is not her little sister anymore.After many many attempts to rescue her ,she finally get a permission from the Emperor to see Neida -but it is too late..she is already sentenced to exile ,and she probably not even survive the way to farest provice of the Empire on south. is it really too late? If she just recognize Vakkun's eyes ,maybe there is still a chance to be herself?

next milestone coloringWIP tomorrow

cheers
 
  05 May 2006
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one of my faveritest!!
just a little sad about you put it in so late, I noticed it just now.
it is a great work!!
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  05 May 2006
Nice work! Love the environment. The charaters in the back are quite imposing - good job. My only suggestion is to maybe bring some more clor into the skin of the foreground characters. Looking great.
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  05 May 2006
welldone mate,a great entry i must say,that character kneeling on the ground is finely exercuted.
 
  05 May 2006
out * standing

great change on the fg character. legs read much better now.

inspirational stuff,
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  05 May 2006
Fantastic. Dont know what else to say... just good luck.
 
  05 May 2006
Wow, very cool entry! I really like this one....
 
  05 May 2006
Great one


Good luck hommie !
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  05 May 2006
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wow, still a wip ?
are you sure you are not finished ?
beautifuly done, i can see the whole story behind this piece and your drawing matches your story telling abilities.
good luck, i have a feeling about this piece winning something
 
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