|09 September 2012||#2|
CG Model Supervisor
santa Monica, USA
Join Date: Oct 2003
Overall I like it but there are a few things I noticed.
Right now I don't know where to look at in the image.There is this vast and even amount of details all over the image and it is competing with itself. What you need is a "main character" that tells a story and stands out in terms of composition, light. colors etc...
All the foreground wires kinda distract the eye more than leading the eye to the point of interest (which is missing at the moment).
The moon is way too pale and the lighting doesn't match to moon lighting if that is what you wanted to do.
I don;t understand why there's a shadow of the foreground element onto the sky on the left side.
I think you can make a very nice image with the elements you have. re-arrange them, put a point of interest in the right spot and work on the background sky
|09 September 2012||#3|
Join Date: Feb 2008
This was very useful. Very good critique. I didn't work on background and I want to put some character in the center of the view.
When I was looking for references I was looking at your work from Anonymous. I like it.
I will try to correct image and post it.
Thank you again very much you help me a lot.
|09 September 2012||#5|
Join Date: Sep 2003
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