Full Moon Night , Amitabha Joshi (3D)

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  08 August 2004
Full Moon Night , Amitabha Joshi (3D)

Title: Full Moon Night
Name: Amitabha Joshi
Country: Nepal
Software: Maya

Its supposed to be a backyard at night. And the textures were done in Photoshop.
All critiques & comments are welcome

  08 August 2004
in my opinion u should use a light behind the camera cuz it's too dark and try 2 add few bounces on key light


Junaid R
  08 August 2004
I thought the tree looks good, but I can tell it's done with alpha maps, am I right? Could use more texturing for surfaces, and the bg looks somewhat imcomplete. Lighting looks great, and overall feel is there.

  08 August 2004
I agree with junaid_r about the bouncing lights. Also about the lights, the position of the moon doesn't seem to correspond to the light source. The fence makes a shadow in one direction, the chimney in another (are there 2 light sources?). The vase, for instance, seems to be projecting 2 shadows.

The grass could be made of mesh, instead of just texture, as the house is dirty and probably has no one living in. The corners, where the wall meets the ground, would benefit greatly of mesh grass.

The fog, which I believe is there to add atmosphere, is too strong, washing out the background. Probably some background, just some, would help. And instead of a such heavy fog, tuning the colors a little bit in Photoshop could give the extra mood.

I also liked the tree!

  08 August 2004
thanks for the comments u guys
  08 August 2004
hey nice one buddy ...!!!"
i like the envirnment feel of night
and also like the teture
must benaya hai dost
  01 January 2006
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