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Old 04-05-2014, 11:46 PM   #1
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Spring, Soren Zaragoza (2D)



Title: Spring
Name: Soren Zaragoza
Country: Mexico
Software: Photoshop
Submitted: 5th April 2014

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Old 04-08-2014, 02:17 PM   #2
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Nice wheat field. That is one skinny woman (almost emaciated). I like the pose, though, and how you wrapped her body (or part of it) with that flowing sash. Nice job with the skin tone rendering and detailing on the hair. Her arms and legs, though, came out disproportional. The bend of the right arm is okay, but how it meets the shoulder and moves to the breast is a bit off; and her left arm is a bit tube like and her hair is distorting how it connects to the body. Her left thigh and leg are too thin and didn't transition as well as her right leg. Her torso (despite being rather thin) came out really well (I like the articulation of the stomach and ribcage; and how it transitions to the hips). Her facial features are nice, but the right cheek got a little too bright in highlight (slightly distorting the shape of her face there). Her hair came out nice, though. Overall, a really cool piece. Keep it up. Great job.
 
Old 04-13-2014, 04:06 PM   #3
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I checked but this indeed is the Showcase section not critique, even so I'm half not seeing or agreeing what linainverse23 points at. Keep in mind it's always easier to give critique.

Personally I like constructive critique rather than being pointed at flaws.
How would it become better? What am I not seeing?

Anyways this is top notch work. It stopped me from moving on surfing the internets.
So yeah I love it! I'm lovin it.
 
Old 04-15-2014, 04:36 PM   #4
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wow cool...i like this
 
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