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Old 07-29-2012, 07:35 PM   #1
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Hello everyone. New to this site and just recently added my artwork. I received an email suggesting that I post it in the "work in progress section".
I'd really appreciate some feedback, crits and suggestions on how this piece can be improved.

 
Old 07-30-2012, 12:12 AM   #2
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This could be the cover for a metal band CD.

I had to look twice to see that the blue fog comes from his staff and not from the circle thingy. It's a bit unfortunate that the staff end right on the circle.

Maybe it would be more readable if you put a light source at the end of the staff, to accentuate that this is where the fog comes from.
 
Old 07-30-2012, 03:05 AM   #3
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Good point about the staff and light source that should be eminating from it. Thanks
 
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