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Old 11-22-2012, 07:08 PM   #1
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Sit your ass down dialogue

He talks to the cam (a off-screen character)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=s_J02YXMZzk


I tried to make a 2nd version, which the character is talking to a character in screen left. In this version, he sticks his arm to his back, the "incapable of doing this" hand gesture is smaller, and he does a lean in at the end.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2KTolxwQAVQ

Please give me critique!
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Old 11-30-2012, 03:19 PM   #2
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I kind of like the second one--

Use some overlap, delay his head from arriving, etc.
His IK on his sword hand; keep it subtley moving all the time.
 
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