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Old 04 April 2013   #1
Pantomime Baseball Pitch

Still a WIP, just wanted a test render.
All Feedback is welcome

http://vimeo.com/64043496

 
Old 04 April 2013   #2
Hi JoshAdler!
I think this is fun little shot you have here, i really like how you made the legs round in parts, its makes it have a great feel.
Though i feel the head shakes are a little too fast and you really need to include the neck and rest of the body in that move.
Then I also think you should get the weight over the planted leg before you can lift the other leg. And then I think that the leg kicks up a little too late after the throw.

Hope that helps and I look forward to seeing this shot finished.

-Yasha
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Old 04 April 2013   #3
Nice work, Josh! Yeah, that rounded look to the arms and legs, that definitely feels very cool. I like the hand rolling the ball in the beginning too.

Just wanted to add that there's also a distracting headshake during the windup, when he's totally balanced on that one leg. His face seems to look right, twice, right before he throws the ball. Might just be a stray key?
 
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