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  02 February 2002
Talking PA Challenge - Character - insanelight

Hi!
Well, this is my work-in-progress character...
I have a lot of work to do on it, but I would know what you think about this start!
Tell me, tell me.. I will really glad to anyone give me some concrete advices and criticism.





Thanks to all!

Gabriele
http://www.insanelight.com
 
  02 February 2002
hey man!!! cool proportions and shape!!

Only I think he needs a tail... but..it would be something original too.

Really cool model... The fold are simetrical but,.. I think your are going to fix them in the final version (without mirrors).

Come on! we want discover the head!
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  02 February 2002
Thanks Pabbloz!
The tail is a nice idea, I'll think on it.
Yes, the fold are simmetrical... I'm working with istance to modeling the char; I'll adjust it in the final and no-mirrored version.
The head is a problem... I'm thinking what do.
I have some ideas about his weapons...

Ok, I hope to read other comments and advices!

Bye bye
Gabriele.
http://www.insanelight.com
 
  02 February 2002
cool, interesting anatomy.

the forearms should be intergrated/blended into the elbow area, at the moment it looks a bit like its been plugged in.

some ankles wouldnt go amiss either.

sweet design!
 
  02 February 2002
Many thanks for the compliments Krugar!
Your advices about the arms and the legs are important: in this moment I'm working hard on these parts!
After, I have to donate him a head..

For the weapons, I think to a BIG clave with nails and a boooomerang!

Gabriele
http://www.insanelight.com
 
  02 February 2002
great work i like the legs and breast it looks very strong !

mabey u need to finish the head and the hand need to work too..

finish soon
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  02 February 2002
Mhmhm iu think that legs are wronb proportions......

(Penso che cmq le proporzioni delle gambe vadano rivedute)

Good Work!!
(Bello il resto!!!)
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  02 February 2002
Thumbs down

very interesting proportions! Talk about the evolution of love handles!

It's looking good. The feet don't seem to blend with the rest of the body. Try making the bump a little flatter. You could also smooth out where the elbow meets the forearm.

Nice work so far!
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  02 February 2002
hehe .. i love ur style my friend

you have a very neat model ... keep on good work
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  02 February 2002
A little update...

Ok, I have worked on his hands and the head...
I have to work a lot more on the head... I want add more details.

But... sh#t... I have the temperature! :(

Ok... I wait your opinions!
Give me advices about the head and the mask!



Bye!

Gabriele
http://www.insanelight.com
 
  02 February 2002
Nice !

Hey ! A very unique anatomy. Really great shapes and curves...

You are a MAXer, right ?

Maybe the legs are a little bit too short...i know it“s stylized but that“s the only thing that catches my eye

Keep on working, dude !!

PS: Also a great web-site . . .
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  02 February 2002
Hey BASSit, many thanks for the compliments!
Yes, I use MAX 4.2.
I know, legs are short, but I like it... I don't know why..

Thanks for the comment about my site!

Gabriele
http://www.insanelight.com
 
  02 February 2002
Ciao, perchč non provi a snellire l'avanbraccio e raccordarlo un po' di pił con il braccio anche se parlare di proporzioni mi sembra fuori luogo vista la spiccata fantasiositą del personaggio!

P.S. Complimenti! Ogni volta rimango di stucco!

English version:
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  02 February 2002
Here is what "dux8780" said . . .

Hello, why tests not to slim the avanbraccio and raccordarlo a little
more with the arm even if to speak about proportions me seen place
seems outside the detached fantasiositą of the personage!

P.s. It compliments! Every time I remain of stucco

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For all those who dont have the time to translate
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  02 February 2002
Talking

Okay !!! cool !
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