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Old 10-28-2003, 02:55 AM   #1
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Cool Character:Old Man Head (DcHeirn)

Can you trust him for a surgical operation...?if not,i succed my challenge

Unfortunatly the beard seems to be not very naturell.i got to make it more convincing.

Feedback are welcome


Hope you'll enjoy

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Old 10-28-2003, 03:13 AM   #2
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F A N T A S T I C as usual!!! As I already told you, you need to work on the beard, Shag Hair can be a pain it seems... :\ What about the size of the ears Seb? They seem a bit big but prolly i'm wrong, excellent work as usual, maybe your most realistic so far!
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Old 10-28-2003, 03:55 AM   #3
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This thing is perfect god damnit....
Awesome job stuzzi....
 
Old 10-28-2003, 04:51 AM   #4
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this is a wip..... ok.. unfair... only complaint.. he totally looks like the doctor dude from FF the move....
 
Old 10-28-2003, 06:58 AM   #5
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DAMN!
no negative things to say whatsoever - just get crackin' with it!
excellent stuff
 
Old 10-28-2003, 07:41 AM   #6
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This is awesome work. That's all I can say. Finish him please.
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Old 10-28-2003, 07:53 AM   #7
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Looks fantastic.. almost like an evil Dr.Cid from the ff movie the spirit within
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Old 10-28-2003, 09:10 AM   #8
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hey stuzzi,

i just wake up, launch cgtalk...see stuzzi... ....lets see it!

For what you say, you´re going for a perturbated, inestable, dangerouss & wise type, right?

My very first impression was that he´s worried, annoyed, something has happened....


and yep, tweak the beard...
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Old 10-28-2003, 09:19 AM   #9
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I don't think he looks too evil, but I certainly wouldn't want him operating on me... He looks cold and calculating though! Somewhat like a James Bond villain....

But the detail is amazing, especially the skin creases and wrinkles. Love the bags under the eyes.
Only the beard needs a little work to make it look as good as the rest of the character!
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Old 10-28-2003, 11:26 AM   #10
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Man, Stuzzi, all your characters look amazing. Everything feels correct. Yes, the beard may be the weakest link but even that looks pretty good. You did fail if you tried to make him look evil or sinister though...I think he just looks serious, like any good surgeon should be

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Old 10-28-2003, 01:00 PM   #11
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Oef, that is great!

Hey, couldn't you write a tutorial or article or something?
I would love to know how you create these models.
Do you use a lot of reference material?
What program do you use?

Its just amazing..the details...I think the ears are a little low detail compared to the rest of the face and they look a little far to the back of the head. But i could be wrong...

The beard is a little straight, but i think the mustage is good, maybe the hairs are a bit to long or thick.

Simply amazing, looking forward to see this model finished.

Oh, he does look a bit evil, like those evil scientists in those old sc-fi movies. But he also looks like he has a conscience. There is a form of remorse in his eyes.
 
Old 10-28-2003, 10:40 PM   #12
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thx for Feedback

thirdEye_01 ===thank you guy!yes Shag hair is a Pain,maybe less intuitiv than Shave&Haircut,it's a shame but it's still good.I can't afford a large budget of polygon,however it could be the solution to have a more natural beard.
Well,I notice that the ears become "melted" through the years...in that way the ears is longer and loose its volume.Maybe i'm wrong in that case my grandfather is a mutant .

Berko/AndyH/fried=== Thank a lot,for sure he will be finished one day.

Altermind/The_Row === Doctor Sid..? WOo WOo What a nice compliment!!thank you guy!

Koroko === you've just wake up and see me.. i prefer wake up to see a gorgeous blond woman in my calendar!!
Yes that's it..that the word i looked for:instable
Is he really looked as worried?hum?

Jhavna/wiro===Thx a lot!,Indeed he don't really look evil,but pretty instable,Unpredictable.when i modeled him i was thinking about a brillant genius who need to prove his intelligent by creating horrible creations.The evil is not him but his creations...

DogmaD===thx for compliment.i use Maya for the modeling and Max for rendering,so The beard was created with Shag&hair.
Well people told me if i can male a tutorial,each time i answer that other Cgartist already made some very nice.I have no more tips to share.the Key word is "observation"..Everyday life is my reference material.To be more precised i did not used some imagePlanes(face/profil).However i was inspired by an old man in Dune(David lynch's movie).
the ears have no wrinkles or they are to subtle to be modeled.the prespective can't really show you the location of the ears,i'll try to post a new pic soon.

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Old 10-28-2003, 11:03 PM   #13
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goddamn guy!!...,thats awesome modeling skill !!!
the head does look incredible and gives a imperssion of an evil,yet thoughtful and calculating person who's gathered a lot of skill through years of experience...well i dont know if that was what you were going for but thats hpw i felt about him...fix the beard as you already mentioned
keep up the great work man....
can wait to see this finished.
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Old 10-29-2003, 03:08 AM   #14
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Woah! Very nice work here. If there is anything to crit, it's the lack of a body. Adding this thread to watch!
 
Old 12-01-2003, 09:34 AM   #15
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Hi jdsb===Very flatterned by your crit.
Yep,that the look that I wish to give to him.Glad to see that people feel that about him.I was afraid that someone compare this character with Dr Sid of FinalFantasy.i hope thath he have his own personality.to tell the true DcHeirn look like my neighbour..hummm i not sure that SquareUs know my neighbour

i'm glad that you enjoy my stuff.thx you

Drakaran=== I don't know if i could finish his body.Due to a lack of time i can't never finish my personal work.Hum I need to have holidays.For have fun,If i begin to make a full body i prefer to make a girl with big néné .it's more interesting thath a old man with wrinkles.beurk..

thx you guys

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