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Old 01 January 2004   #1
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Here's a "erotik fantasy"stuff.
I try to give her some sensuality trough her posing and facial expression.Soon i will add a kind of snake.you can already see its body roll up around the woman.
The snake is symbol of the temptation...that's why I choose
a semi orgasmique feeling.

I'm not sure to succeed,..wait for your comments.

your Critics are welcome
Thx u

 
Old 01 January 2004   #2
wow looks amazing I love it only the snake doesn't look like it has any weight to it, plus her hand doesn't look like it is squashing the boob at all, but otherwise i am digging this picture i just hope you finish this one

Rych
 
Old 01 January 2004   #3
Wow ! Ca commence fort ! La suite ...
 
Old 01 January 2004   #4
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I have nothing to say, just Woaw!!

Maybe her biceps and its right arm especially looks too soft, too flexible, not enough defined.
Otherwise nothing to criticize!
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Old 01 January 2004   #5
Thats an amazing model!

I think the right breastmuscle connects to the right arm to low. Thats why the distance between the armpit and the chavicle looks a little big to me. I really like the way you have modelled the belly area, looks great, with the little layer of fat on it.
The feet might need a little more work, shape of the foot doesn't look correct to me, i can't explain what is wrong with them in english, so sorry about that.

Well, no more crits from me, great work as always!
 
Old 01 January 2004   #6
Great work so far... I agree that the feet look strange though. Keep it up!
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Old 01 January 2004   #7
ça va faire mal Excellent boulot stuzzi
T'as modélisé comme ça ou t'as fait un setup? (t'as ptet fait un setup rapide aussi pour dégrossir la pose)
Bonne continuation en tout cas
 
Old 01 January 2004   #8
excellent modeling and skinning !!! comme d'hab...
la pose est un peu délicate (la main qui cache le sein ne me plait pas trop ...enfin c'est personnel.)

Autrement je trouve originale qu'elle soit assise de cette facon

j'aimerais bien voir des gros plans si possible

MAYA ?? max ??
 
Old 01 January 2004   #9
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Like usual wonderful work !!!
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Old 01 January 2004   #10
Great modeling as usual Stuzzi!

Keep on.
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Old 01 January 2004   #11
I already told you, but great job stuzzi.
I hope you will have time to finish it for the expose deadline.
Take care,

Pascal

PS: Au plaisir de rebosser ensemble ainsi qu'avec Pixopath.
 
Old 01 January 2004   #12
Very nice work!

Remind me of salma hayek (From Dusk Till Dawn)
 
Old 01 January 2004   #13
Lordrych***
Well,You allright my dear! the snake doesn't look to have

weight.I forget to precise that the snake will be

metallic..In that way he has to respect the density of

metal.Its deformation is different than a real organic snake
She's not really squash her boob...,she just hide it.squashed

boobs look to obscene,this is not the fell i wanna

give.Otherwise,I shall have had to change the position of her

hand.Thx you for your crit



Riddick***
good notice...it's a good news if this part of her body look

flexible.One of my preocupation is to harmoniz the snake

and the girl by making her more suppled with her posing and

morphology.I like the way disney stress the animal behaviour of Tarzan.his Hand is like animal feet.I try to keep this aspect with SUBTLETY.So it's not an

inconvenient if she's flex.However if it's TOO flexible,i'll try to fix

it.thx you!

DogmaD***
wwoo thank DogmaD!
Well,concerning the distance between the armpit and the

clavicle,You should considerer that the woman hasn't a

neutral posing,She's tilted a bit forward...Judging the size

of the arm, I did not think of having made a mistake on these

proportions,maybe i wrong
i'll take a look,thank u!

Kel Solaar-mickatt***
Yo merci
Oui c'est bien ca,j'ai degrossi un maximum la pose pour aller au plus vite,je pouvais pas m'eterniser dessus.C'est pour une image fixe,ca n'aurai pas été fun de faire un setup pour si peu de choz.Le posing devait etre le points fort,je voulais avoir un controle absolu dessus.C'est le moyen le plus efficace que j'ai trouvé.
J'ai prevu un gros pour toi mickatt ,jvai la poster des que possible.

Pixopath-The Ripper-Stantor***
as usual thank u for the abetment

zegritch***
Yep,i could finished it for the deadline,maybe for next year

ps: oui ca serai cool de rebosser encore ensemble dans les films.J'ai vu que tu etai un peu fatigué vers la fin,mais bon,ya pas meilleur acteur porno que toi lol

Keddy***
Ohhh yeahh!!good reference

DogmaD M@.***
Maybe the perspective make the foot strange i'll try to post others views.thanks for coments.

see ya
 
Old 01 January 2004   #14
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Very nice. Although I don't think this pose is really sexy !

Sicco
 
Old 01 January 2004   #15
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That is Great modeling , ....well .... maybe its just me , but I have the feeling like she is pretending to like the snake , and I belive the way the legs are cause this feeling
Great Work
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