Still: my 1st head (WIP)

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Old 12 December 2002   #76
hey Third, it's getting really interesting now! I would try to concentrate on the eyes, to give 'em a better look (I'm talking about materials, shading, lighting). You should give'em a more "liquid-like" look, they're too dry at the moment

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Old 12 December 2002   #77
Wow Third! I think he's getting ever more realistic You're on the right way!!
 
Old 12 December 2002   #78
Now i'm gonna work on those damned eyebrows...
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Old 12 December 2002   #79
looking better and better!
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Old 12 December 2002   #80
wow that skin smells..)

I almost can smell the skin odour..nice..
 
Old 12 December 2002   #81


Nice improvement, Third! U r on the right way: take care about the bump.
 
Old 12 December 2002   #82
Another update (i came back to the mesh since i didn't like the way it turned...)
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Old 12 December 2002   #83
looking good ThirdEye well done
 
Old 12 December 2002   #84
still trying to find a good lighting setup...
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Old 12 December 2002   #85
Talking

this kicks ass , you've inspired me to give head modelling a go, nice one third eye
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Old 12 December 2002   #86
I think that the new refinements to give a more hard and though look to the head need some smoothing.

Here in detail the areas which need a bit of smoothing in my opinion



The lips are very well shaped, but i think that the bump map to simulate small wrinkles in the upper lip is quite inappropriate, better to remove it.

Still waiting for a great pair of eyebrows !

Ciao, Ale
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Old 12 December 2002   #87
Hi ThirdEye_01

Excellent modelling
The texture is welldone (altho need bit of specularity, most face skin are a bit oily except if this guy is using some powder ).

Anyway I really like some imperfections you gave him, like that scar on his hair area. However I agree with Eklettica abot the bump on his upper lip. And if you look at his left lower lip the texture is a bit bigger than the lip area as if he wears lipstick. The texture on his chin area looks abit distorted. And this is one thing from my personal taste..I think his head would be better if you tone it down (looks like a cone there ) but like I said it's only my personal preference .
All in all this is a great job actually Looking forward for the eyelashes. Keep up thhe goodwork ThirdEye_01. You are talented

Ciaoo

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Old 12 December 2002   #88
Thank you really much guys, here's another point of view, i'll work on it soon
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Old 12 December 2002   #89
Thumbs down

Nice... but you should spend more time on eyelids. The Texturing is GREAT, boy!!!
 
Old 12 December 2002   #90
Hehehehe grazie mille Seba!
 
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