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Old 02 February 2010   #31
LOL awesome sketches so far, cant wait to see this develop
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Old 02 February 2010   #32
Brilliant concept & your sketches so far are outstanding.

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Old 02 February 2010   #33
haha, browndljr & Bran ! Made me laugh.

serio, browndljr, Arne, Bran, HeadSmell, AJ - thanks guys! I'm glad you like it. Next update will come this week. I've almost finished the whole drawing. Just a few details left .
 
Old 02 February 2010   #34
Work In Progress: wip3_title



Well here we go with some thoughts on the title placement.
I like no.1 for it's "in-the-face-ness" but has to get the value right , so it doesn't distract the illustration part. But this one probably conveys best the spirit of the topic.
I like No.2 as well... but maybe too simple.
No. 3 is way too simple and standard, imho.

But let me know your thoughts on this.
 
Old 02 February 2010   #35
Work In Progress: wip3



And the drawing, which is quite final, as I'm pretty satisfied with it.
There is only some stuff missing in the back ( like few more zombieheads) , and on the ground(maybe some stuff the victims dropped), which I will do on the fly while I render the whole piece.
 
Old 02 February 2010   #36
Originally Posted by yakonusuke: But let me know your thoughts on this.
I really prefer the first treatment. Even though the title is huge, it doesn't detract from the artwork IMO.
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Old 02 February 2010   #37
will there be a monochrome version on vhs, too?

this is evolving great!
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Old 02 February 2010   #38
haha, this is looking great, I love the expression of the guy on the floor... the only thing I could crit is that the face of the fat guy with the portable tv looks a bit strange for me, but I can't tell exactly why... or it might be my personal taste, maybe he's too ugly for me, heheh...
about the layouts, I think I prefer the 1st one too... or the 2nd
keep up the good work!!
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Old 02 February 2010   #39
Overall it is looking really good, but I have two really small things to crit.
First, the right hand of the kneeing character between the legs of the main character looks a little bit misplaced. In my opinion the hand should be somewhere behind the left leg of the main character.
Second, I would equalise the zone where the right foot of the main charcter hits the hand of the lying character and the other foot.
But this is just nitpicking
 
Old 02 February 2010   #40
AJ: Even though I didn't go for it in the next update, It's still in the game... but I'm still not sure about that placement... thanks for your opinion!

Bran: thanks man

elmasfeo: Yeah, I feel the same about the tv guy . Will put some additional work in that guy . Thank you!

ocin-r: Thanks for the critics! I will peek into this as I progress!
 
Old 02 February 2010   #41
Work In Progress: wip4



Here's a small preview of where it's most likely going.
 
Old 02 February 2010   #42
Man, that is so cool, really love the geeks have this Zombie like postures, works soooo well lol, what a great idea.
 
Old 02 February 2010   #43
super cool. You can work out some of the details now... like star wars t-shirts also I think one of the geek could be a little bit fatter. Just a stereotype but could add variety to the image. But overall I love it.
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Old 02 February 2010   #44
Just had to say , i love this one.

my 2 cents about the tile, might be stupid, but feel free to ignore them.

- pixelated blood dripping from the title.
- some sort of pacmen with teeth replacing the "e" in geek.

Again , awesome entry. Feel free to ignore my input.
 
Old 02 February 2010   #45
HA HA HA HA HA!!! FUNNY
Nerd Rules!!!

Good Luck Man!!!
 
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