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  06 June 2006
3D Female Anime W.I.P

Hey everybody!
I'm currently modelling 3d anime character.
Latest update 08/08


Ref -

Crits are welcome
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Last edited by TomerEp : 08 August 2006 at 01:37 PM. Reason: Update
 
  07 July 2006
her hip's too thin, you're not making her eye attracting enough, beef her up abit.

Last edited by Zenneth : 07 July 2006 at 04:35 AM. Reason: wrong word fix
 
  07 July 2006
Ummmm

I think Zenneth mistook the reference picture for your finished model As for the legs, the start is ok. Don't loose definition on the sandals because of the smoothing (I am talking about the straps). And make sure the flaps of the boots are better readable - make them stand out farther from the boot itself (like in your ref photo).
Good luck!
 
  07 July 2006
ooops

Ok, just realised I was an idiot...he wasn't refering to her EYES being attractive enough, but to HER being eye-attracting enough. Silly me. He's right about the hips.
 
  07 July 2006
Originally Posted by TheJinj: Ok, just realised I was an idiot...he wasn't refering to her EYES being attractive enough, but to HER being eye-attracting enough. Silly me. He's right about the hips.


Nah man, You're not an idiot, I just re-read what I wrote and realised that I would've misunderstood myself. forgot the -
 
  07 July 2006
Thanks for replying folks.
The right leg was just for reference and was ment to give me prespective where to put the skirt on, this is the latest update, added some detail to the leg and made the thigh more attractive
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  07 July 2006

for a second I thought that's your final, I almost fainted. Then I realize that your ref, I fainted

it's gonna be a great thread if you can do it as you did your car, which i'm sure you can. keep up the work~

p.s: thanx for dropping by at my post.
 
  07 July 2006
Made head model, need to complete him, but this is what I done untill now.
Modo render:


Presp:

Side:


As always, crits are appriciated.

btw reference:

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  07 July 2006
The body looks good compared to the figurine, nice work.

For the face, I thing you mainly have problemes with proportions. But also, from the side view the imaginary line going from the forehead to the chin should be like a curved-back arc.

Keep going, you need to get the head to the same quality as the body.
 
  07 July 2006
Update on the face, please give me some feedbacks so I'll know what you think about it.
Modo render:


Presp:


Side:
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  07 July 2006
Originally Posted by Olivier_Thériault: The body looks good compared to the figurine, nice work.

For the face, I thing you mainly have problemes with proportions. But also, from the side view the imaginary line going from the forehead to the chin should be like a curved-back arc.

Keep going, you need to get the head to the same quality as the body.


yah, there's no significance problem with the front, but the side's alot off
 
  07 July 2006
Thanks, but can you tell me whats off so I could work on it?
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  07 July 2006
It's the mouth and chin, Olivier said it too, your's too much out forward
 
  07 July 2006
The main probleme is probably the reference pictures. Can you show them?
 
  07 July 2006
Sure, this are some of the reference pictures I use:





for more just:
http://images.google.com/images?q=boa+kwon&hl=en
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